The love for you in me
Tells me to leave you free
Advice me to let you decide
Demands me to get it done.
But the fear in me , that
You will never be mine
Gets hold of my mind
When I decide to leave you free.
The fear in me tells me
If I let you now, then
I Loose you now ,which
Turns my mind up side down.
The fear in me triumphs
which in turn turns out to be
A struggling stage
In which both of us fight,
You for your freedom
And I for you
I love you, for which
I cant see you sad
I may think of leaving you, again
Though it may hurt me hard
Deep in heart leaving me in grief
And I wont be happy
With my decision ,but
One thing , of which I will
Be happy about , I made
You happy again, by
Letting you do what you want to.
I know , I can keep hold
Of you for a while, but
Not so long, as you are not
So far away from the destiny.
I can feel the change, which
Itself is not bearable for me
I don’t know how I will
Pass that time, but one thing,
I know, Which is, I don’t want
To see You sad at all.
I know, it’s just only my fear
Which makes me think so.
I know , I have known you
And you have known me
Long before the fear
Ever was even born.
I know now that, I need to act
Before it triumphs over me.
I need to kill it, before
It kills the love in me.
I know this is a duel
Between me and you , Mr. Fear.
You think ,standing behind some one
Keeps you safe ? you feel ,
You are safe behind love
You think to deal with you
I will have to deal with love first?
Thinking that it will be a
Hard step for me
To fight against my love
Where I will panic.
Then, I must thank you
For bringing love between us
Close to me once again , for whom
I was fighting,. You forgot
Love is more powerful than you
And when you where
In between us , it was then
The whole problem was.
Thank you for opening my eyes
I see only love now,
not you any more.
I am back where I was
Long ago, I am where
I have yearn to be in.
I am back, where me and
Love exist, but not the very you.
11 comments:
You wrote this???
I couldn't comment on the last post.. The poem in that was good...
This is marvellous..
If this one is written by you then hats off to you.. And, I should say it is high time you improve your language that you can enter into the serious business of writing!!! :P
WW.
hehe... thanks...
You made my day(naa, for bunch of days ) ... I must say.
Of course I wrote this one . any doubt ??
"serious business of writing"
again I fear, will that end up as a dream :)
excellent work, a change from ur usual chalus, i never thought you can write like this.....hope that ur dream will come true
ayyo ente thala karangi ... ente maathram kuyappam aayrikkanam ... vivek alle kallip ennu paranjirikkunnee :D
but i admire the "essence" of the poem very much, though i think with your potential you could make it more beautiful ... ofcourse wayyyy better than the copy pasted poem in your last article..
this poem is far better than the poem u copied to impress Mr Love......Mr Love will b more flattered reading this poem ... gr8 work di...:)
@ Arun chettan
hehe thanks ( oru change aaraa agrahekathe :P)
@ Riaz
thanks man :)
@ Bubbly
danks lady :P
So who brings out the artist in you???
Speaking of dreams, once i dreamt you became a famous writer and sold more than a million copies of your books, and that you granted me 20% of the royalty. So you do the working part, I will do the dreaming part. Just for you :P
of course you can :)
but that deal was only for that book. . rem ?? :P
yes... but dreams are never based on rules or deals. More importantly, the emphasis was on your doing the working part.
see ..
...blah blah .....So you do the working part, ...blah .. blah blah :P
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